2/27/12,ekphrastic poem,forest cleaning after michael sailstorfer (prof notes)

fantastic _____________
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consider lowercasing these opening lines()

___________________ ha! sarcasm works



ha () ________________ () not sure about the verb tense

                                                               for you


                     () don't know if we need extra space here
(could delete this space)



tone shifts here, seems much stronger, more directed & new racial innuendo added

this tone is effective, i think, tempers didacticism with lyricism