i like the silliness here, definitely reading as two kids. | whoa! | i like how you have established the dynamic between the sisters of leader/follower, only at the end, though, do you start building some tension--what's making this trip?

2/10/11

laces up her reeboks, "how cold is it out?"
"idk, like 55." -- "wear a sweater"

"so, where are we going today, little lady?"
--intended destination, which, as follower, is also hers--
follow the leader--skip. gallop. jump.--driveway to pavement

"we'll look silly. dilly."
"follow, follower!"

slaps her behind and touches the tar 4 times. 4 times. 4 times. 4 times.

"how long"
"too long
hurry up"

hops from sidewalk to grass, 1 , 2, 3, 4.

"nope. no luck, me neither."
"no, it's the bad blood."
"dad's arm."
"they don't want anything to do with us--our family."

4x 4x 4x 4x
1. 2. 3. 4.